I had the following idea for a ballet.
If you have time can you take a look at
the following outline that I have created for a possible ballet. any
feed back is welcome, good or bad.
Ballet – Outline – Title?
Scene 1: Curtain rises
on a barren and
desolate landscape, the full moon slowly rises over the distant
barren mountains.
Scene 2: A group of grotesque demons
enter and begin a wild a chaotic dance.
Scene 3: A young and nubile girl is
doing water ablutions in an oasis in the barren land. Small strange
and grotesque (reptilian?) creatures stand a watch over her as she
does her ritual cleaning.
Scene 4: The small creatures begin to
cavort and dance as the girl meditates (with her eyes closed) under
the small waterfall that feeds the oasis.
Scene 5: Something startles the
creatures and they scurry about before hiding behind various rocks
that surround the oasis. The Girl remains undisturbed in her
meditation, her eyes remain closed.
Scene 6: Enter the demons with their
chaotic dance; at first they do not see the girl. Their dance comes
to a sudden stop when they she her sitting under the waterfall.
Scene 7: They begin their chaotic dance
against before rushing towards to girl to seize her. But they are
unable to reach her as some invisible barrier shocks and burns them
when they get too close; her eyes remain closed, her expression is
one of peace and calm.
Scene 8: Frustrated the demons storm
off. The girl opens her eyes and comes out of her mediation. Standing
she beings to stretch and warm up (Katas ? [形])
as if preparing for something. Her small grotesque creature
companions begin to do the same.
Scene 9: The demons return; they mock
and taunt the Girl and the small creatures but do not approach them,
the girl stands still immune to their taunts. The demons stop their
taunting and scurry to one side their eyes downcast, as if they where
afraid.
Scene 10: A large demon, “king” of
the demons enters and approaches the girl. The takes up a defensive
stance as if she is expecting to be attacked. The large demon is
startled by the invisible barrier surrounding the grils that shocks
and burns him, but it only a minor hindrance and he pushes through
the barrier and attacks the girl.
Scene 11: As the girl and the large
demon engage in combat, the small creatures and the other demons also
begin fighting each other. Many of the small creatures and demons are
seriously wounded or killed. The girl and the large demon inflict
serious wounds on each other. Seriously (mortally wounded?) the girl
lands one last blow on the large demon that destroys him; banishing
him from the world. The few remaining demons flee in terror leaving
their wounded and dieing comrades behind.
Scene 12: With her remaining strength
the girl attends to her wounded companions; the small creatures.
Pouring her power into them she heals all of them, even restoring
ones that seem to have been killed. With her healing of the last
creature she lays down right side, her head propped up by a smooth
stone and apparently falls asleep.
Scene 13: The small creatures form a
circle around the girl wait for her to awake. But it soon become
clear that she will not awake. So the small creatures slowly begin to
pile stones around and on top of her making a rough burial mound.
Scene 14: After the mound is finished,
the creatures leave one by one. The full moon now sets in the
distance west and the sky is filled with stars.
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